Feedback Given by Classmates on My Draft Magazine

For the majority of my Draft Magazine I received fairly positive feedback. Many people liked my design, especially my Double Page Spread. The main piece of advice that I was give was to uses more than one artist on on a page at a time. This is an achievable goal as I have a wide variety of shots and a number of different models that I could use. A second piece of advice I was given by a classmate was to ensure that all my text was aligned with the rest of the page and nothing is out of place, this is a easy fix and could be done fairly quickly.

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