Friday, 15 January 2016

25 WORD PITCH


16 comments:

  1. Great pitch, think about how you're going to style your magazine as Hip-Hop may be difficult.

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  2. Good pitch, the only issue is that hip hop may be difficult to recreate

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  3. Great pitch. Its going to be difficult to create this type of magazine but good luck.

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  4. Clear genre and audience. Maybe think about who you will use on your cover, how they will look and how you will recreate it.

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  5. good pitch, agree with the other comments as its a difficult style to create

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  6. Good pitch, I like it how you have chose a different music genre to everyone else as it will make your magazine unique and look good if you do a good job. Just make sure the person you chose for your front cover will fit the genre of music you are basing your magazine on.

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  7. This is a good choice of words to describe your magazine! Keep up the good work!

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  8. Your pitch is really good and the genre is easily identified. However, a hip-hop magazine may be difficult to create.

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  9. Nice clear pitch that shows a clear idea for what you want your magazine to be. It's gonna be difficult to get the style right, but with the right inspiration and mind set you'll pull it off :)

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  10. Great pitch! Well be hard to get the right artist, but looking forward to seeing the project when it is finished.

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  11. Simple but clear pitch! Your genre will be hard to create due needing the right model and costume that will stand out in the magazine and wont look too cheap. For what you are planning to make it, the price is too cheap especially for the older audiences, they would not buy it for this price as they would assume it is not good enough.

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  12. Very clear and simple pitch. This genre of magazine is hard to produce, but I'm sure you'll be able to do it. Your target audience is clear, however it is quite large so this may need tweaking. As well as this, women tend to buy more magazines so you should try and add in a more feminine side to this type of magazine to attract bother genders, however I understand that this could be difficult. Good Luck and Well Done.

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  13. Clear pitch to indicate your ideas! It may be difficult recreating a magazine with this genre as you will have to find someone who fits the aesthetics of a hip hop star, but I wish you the best of luck. Keep up the good work!

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  14. I like that you have chosen a different genre which will make your magazine stand out and be more unique, very clear pitch, the genre will be hard to recreate but it can be manageable.

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  15. A very simple but effective pitch that shows your ideas well. The only problem is this genre of magazine can be very hard to produce but you seem to be very confident in how you will do it, good luck and well done

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  16. A simple but clear pitch. The genre you have chosen is difficult but im sure you will suceed. Only thing to be careful of is that the cover photo model is suitable for your genre. Good luck XD

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